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In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages of ebooks outweigh their disadvantages?

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Since times immemorial, man has always invented and discovered innumerable things. The
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 of
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 made lives easier and the Internet made the smallest information in the world accessible.
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 led to the creation of
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 that are the soft copy versions of the hardcopy
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.In recent years, many people have shown more inclination towards
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 rather than
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paper
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books
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. Undoubtedly, the
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 of
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 outweigh their
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. Let us discuss these in detail in subsequent paragraphs.
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 of
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 and foremost,
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 save the environment, as opposed to
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 that lead to
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 degradation. To elaborate,
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books
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 are soft copy versions that can be accessed via
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 ,whereas
paper
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books
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 are made by cutting trees. As millions of
paper
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books
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 are created every year, it results in the cutting down of thousands of trees, and the consequence of
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 an action is environmental degradation and climate imbalance. Since many
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 are discarded after usage, it
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 creates a lot of
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 waste, and the
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 of
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such
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 waste is quite high.
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, because
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 can be easily saved in
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 and mobiles, it saves a lot of space. To clarify,
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 do not require any extra space in
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 or any extra shelf in libraries. Because there is no additional weight other than the device e-book is saved in, a person can carry hundreds of
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 with itself and can read them sitting anywhere without any constraints. To illustrate, an article published in The Washington Post in May 2012, by its editor Benjamin Bradlee on "Popularity of
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" stated that the majority of people were preferring to read
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 as they found them to be
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 and easy to carry.
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, the greatest advantage of
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cost effective
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 nature. They are economical not only for the readers but
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 for the authors and publishers. To elucidate, since
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 can easily download
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books
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 of their subjects for free, they do not need to pay a lot of money on the
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, and they can share these with others without any additional
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 when an author publishes a book, it can avoid the printing
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 of millions of copies and can create
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 version of the book online, which can be shared with readers at
much
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 lesser
cost
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. To exemplify, a survey conducted by the National Sample Survey Office on 1000
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 , in April 2018, revealed that these
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 saved more than 60% of their costs of
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 by switching from
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books
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 to
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books
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.
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, there are certain
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 of
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books
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 as well. Primarily, many times
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books
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 are available in the form of pdfs, and as these pdfs are just scanned copies of hardcopies, it is very difficult to make notes on these online
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 and to keep a track of the pages. To explicate, many scanned versions of
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 are available in very poor quality. As the data is scanned and not in the text format, it is not possible to search for any particular word
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and it results in reading through multiple pages to look for particular information. In order to make notes on the sheet,
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 needs to have good knowledge of the tools and programs
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 and it can really become a tough task for someone who is not very well acquainted with the
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 or mobiles. To continue, prolong use of
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 can
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 pose various
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 issues. To explain, text on
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 is very small and
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 needs to focus continuously on the screen for long hours. Sitting for
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 stretches of hours can impact the eyesight, cause headaches and backache. Since
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 study most of the time from
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books
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, it can impact their physical
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 very badly and can
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 cause long term problems. To illustrate, a research conducted by the University of British Columbia, Vancouver, Canada in December2019 on 500 of its engineering
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 revealed that the
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 of 70% of the
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 deteriorated within
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one year
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 time frame after continuous use of
e-
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books
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. To encapsulate, it can be concluded that the
merits
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 of
e-
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books
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 outweigh the
demerits
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. While using
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books
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 can be economical and environment friendly
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 have a negative impact on
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on the other hand
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. The negative effects
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 can be easily controlled by taking measures
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 as doing regular exercise. As the
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 outweigh the
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 of using
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, it is no doubt that people are choosing to read
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 rather
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