Some people prefer to spend time with their own age group while others like to spend their time with different age groups. Discuss both approaches and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether individuals are spending their time with
people
with distinct
age
group
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or not. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view and
then
explain why I believe that most individuals hang out with colleagues of the same
age
. There are
people
who argue that the benefits of being surrounded by
people
of the same
age
considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is that they tend to share many
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hobbies and interests. It is
also
possible to say that it is easier to start a conversation and keeping it
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a long time without feeling
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embarrassed
due to the lack of ideas. To illustrate, a talk between a juvenile and an elderly person who do not share the same interests and routine.
On the other hand
, others believe that there are more advantages of spending time with those who have distinct
age
. It is often argued that
this
is the best option to acquire
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different
points of view from others and to evolute as a person.
People
often have
this
opinion because some oldest ones have great
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to share due to their experiences. A
second
point is that some newest ones
estimulate
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stimulate
estimate
those around them with their happiness and enthusiasm.
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, helping you to pass
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some
difficulties with their good sense of humour. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,
however
, I feel that
although
the big chance of learning and listening to
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stories from individuals of
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distinct
age
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sounds interesting, I would prefer to keep surrounded by colleagues with my own
age
group.
This
is because the chances of having the same interests are stronger.
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