Nowadays some people have anti-social behavior and lack respect to others. What are the reasons? What are solutions?

These days some groups of people behave like they prefer to be alone and cannot tolerate others.
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not a person to have self-respect, he would never treat others respectfully.
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cell phones and humans, the more material of proper social behaviour will lessen in communities.Since there is
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popularize addiction to playing or a sort of unbreakable relation which mere has two sides؛ human beings and devices.
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fostering and developing their festivals and ceremonies which are embodied vase age group of people to assist them to
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majority of mobile phones and lack of suitable upbringing methods in family, governments can disappear these issues by boosting family awareness and gathering in public.
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