Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

BG STAT. There is a difference of opinion regarding accepting a non-favourable situation and accept it as it is or amending it
accordingly
in your favour but,
personally
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,personally
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I agree with the
second
idea
that is
changing the situation as per our convenience and
thus
this
essay will discuss both the opinions. Accepting what
life
throws at us and accepting the harsh adversities is a part of
life
, some people believe. The main reason behind
this
thought is Whereas there are individuals who like to change their ways according to the situations they face basically they follow "when
life
throws lemons at you, make lemonade out of it" due to which they easily cope up with any situations easily.
Hardships
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is
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a part of
life
but it gets easier if To conclude,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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