Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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side fact that it is immensely beneficial to

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society, others do not. In my very school of thought,

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everything has its both sides and

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is not an exception, I relatively consider myself an advocate of the latter. Without a shadow of

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belief,

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phenomenon can eventuate some redeeming features since it acts as a precursor for the improvement of the individual. By wisely exchanging their traditional institutions with those from other ethnic groups of

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with ease, they would not only have a better sense of other cultures but

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widen their horizon since they have a chance to make use of multidimensional perspectives and provoke their critical thinking.

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leads to more rounded

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for the nation. While the remarkable merit of it is widely acknowledged, its drawbacks, inevitably, still linger. It is an obstacle for

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to reside harmoniously with those who possess distinct ethos when the distinction between

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’s perceptions can result in miserable misunderstanding or even worse, wars, including both verbal and physical. The USA can be cited as a quintessential example

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nation is home for every race in the world regardless of their skin tone, their

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or their political ideology. Racist, human

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, corporal

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and other wicked acts are considered serious burdens for not only the individual but

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the government to eradicate it. In conclusion, despite the desirable impact brought by the combination of

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from fundamental different ethnic groups, I particularly insist that it still does more harm than good for a community.