Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

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Nowadays,the
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market has become very volatile. There are some
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who hop jobs in 2-3 years,
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some who
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at the same place for their whole life. Both the options have its fair share of nuances and complexities. The
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who
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at the
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same
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place throughout their lives have a familiarity with the
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environment,colleagues and customers.
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,they become used to the
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given to them and perfect it over a period of time.
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that, they have a detailed understanding of the product, and how to go about their
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.
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, they enjoy
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degree of trust with the senior leadership of the company.
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this
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has certain advantages,it has its fair share of downsides too.
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people
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never get to explore different
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cultures and become monotonous over time. They are usually not ready for any disruption in the company and get very specific about roles. They lack knowledge about
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domains as they have never ventured out of their comfort zone.
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,
on the other
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we have the
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hoppers.
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are the
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who prefer to
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at various organizations throughout their life and try it all. Whatever be there reason for shifting jobs, be it money,
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culture or better
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,they always want to explore and perform to their best abilities.
Due to
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this
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they
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experience of working at multiple complex challenges in a single life. They solve different problems at different places and continue to upgrade themselves for the next task.So
this
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attitude rarely makes them settle down
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one place or role.But
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this
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people
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never make friends or bonds in the industries they
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.
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They never have the values of trust or dedication towards one particular role. They sometimes think
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of the goal of
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the industry
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they
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at
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. I think there is no perfect way of working. What suits you best should be the approach of the employees.At the start of
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a career
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, sometimes it is necessary to change
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job
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in order to understand true liking provided that they will
finally
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settle
at the end
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.
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this
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continous
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continuous
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changing
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can have a detrimental impact on
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health and calm of the person. In conclusion,
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should look to be
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long term
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employee
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employees
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but not before truly loving what they do for a living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stability
  • loyalty
  • seniority
  • job satisfaction
  • rapidly changing job market
  • adapt to
  • work culture
  • career progression
  • network
  • diversity of experience
  • adaptability
  • career aspirations
  • dynamic nature
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