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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree.

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Few individuals think that the only way to get the success of the
organization
 is to have an unmatched product.
This
 essay disagrees that one should have a unique item to get success.
This
 essay will discuss
firstly
, how an
enterprise
 will get successful by
demand
 & supply chain,
Secondly
, we will discuss how an
organization
 will be successful by delivering exceptional
service
 to their customers.
Demand
 & supply plays a prominent role to run any successful
enterprise
. To elaborate it one should focus on the necessary items that are in
demand
 in major regions. The faster the growth in revenue the sooner you can improve the by-product and revenue growth is an important metric to calculate the health of the business.
For instance
, Corn production and consumers are more in china as
demand
 & supply is greater compared to any other part of the world. A good
service
 can add tremendous value to their
organization
 so that one can grab an individual's trust that helps out to grow and expand the
enterprise
. Customer satisfaction plays
prime
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 role for any business to grow, Satisfied existing customers can promote their brand to
the
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others for the great experienced they had witnessed. Another main factor for
growing
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 in business is going online by that way they can serve
vast
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the vast
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 majority of
audience
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the audience
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.
For example
, Amazon is an online-based
service
 industry that does exceptional
service
 their clients by delivering A TO Z goods on time
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without
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with out
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 any delay. To conclude,
unique
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 product is not majorly necessary for the
organization
 growth.
Demand
 and supply of goods and exceptional
service
 can give
heightning
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heightening
weighting
 to any
enterprise
.
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