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Nowdays children have too much freedom. Some people think it may be dangerous in some aspects. Do you agree or disagree?

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With changing world and
parents
 becoming busy with their
lives
,
children
 have too much
freedom
.
This
 has led to some negative impacts on toddler's
lives
. Some people think it may be dangerous due to several reasons. I strongly agree with
this
 opinion. With increased
freedom
,
children
 have access to some negative forces in their surroundings which include drug usage and alcohol consumption. With
parents
 being busy with their
lives
 and having very little time to take care of their
children
, young people are under subject to different kinds of exploitation.
Parents
 often leave
children
 with babysitters or other people who are least bothered with the well being of
children
.
This
 results in kids having no suitable guidance system at a young age.
Children
 tend to develop various habits which cause them to harm in several ways.
Parents
 need to dedicate a certain amount of time in their busy
lives
 to take interest in what is going on in their
children
's
lives
. It is their responsibility to make sure their
children
 are not subjected to any kind of negative influences around them.
For instance
,
parents
 can decide to have at least one meal together every day to discuss what problems their toddlers are facing and discuss how they can overcome any problems they are facing. To conclude,
children
 should not be given much
freedom
 as there are a lot of negative impacts to
this
. At tender
age
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children
 will not be knowing what is good or bad for them and often tend to get trapped in negative influences. So it is
parents
' responsibility to make sure
children
 are not given much
freedom
, even though given
freedom
, they should monitor their well being at regular intervals/
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