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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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The opinion of closing the shops which are located in towns and cities
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 of advances in online marketing is held by many
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, but I follow the opposite opinion. On one hand, there are many differences between online and in-person shopping.
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 with, the enjoyment that in-person shopping
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. When
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 drive to malls and shop
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, they spend some time walking and seeing different stores and
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 which cannot happen through the Internet. The other important factor is that hanging around emporiums is fun and a hobby for many individuals,
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 hobby is depended on going out and not just sitting at home and searching the internet.
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 purchasing online saves a lot of time and may have better results, it has many difficulties to consider. As technology improves, ways of crimes expand too. Online crimes, including stealing personal information like passwords, are now new problems that
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 are tackling.
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,
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 may be able to order edible products, but eating out in restaurants or fast food shops are not the same, as the online one stays at home and the face-to-face one goes out to a specific place. In conclusion, despite the possible benefits that online shopping may offer, like making the purchase process easier for us, these merits can never replace the verbal store.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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