Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Decision making is an important aspect

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. While certain individuals opine that there would be independent thinkers in

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society if kids are given

freedom

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to make

an informed decisions

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about their needs and wants. Others think it is vital that young lads decide on issues affecting their well-being. There are valid points on both sides which will

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in the essay below and my opinion

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in the conclusion. On one hand, those who argue that

self autonomy

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of youngsters in terms of food, wears and entertainment is pivotal stating that it actually improves their sense of reasoning and making the

right

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choices for themselves. At the early stage of their

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when their brain cells are still developing and cravings to explore, if several options are presented, they tend to decide on what they want if given the liberty to do so thereby making them believe in themselves and elated.

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, according to the research by

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Health Association of Nigeria, 40% of young lads make personal decisions when given an opportunity.

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, some folks suggest that it is imperative that kids decide on issues affecting their

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. If a child

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lives

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in an unhealthy and abusive environment,

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type of psychological trauma would prompt him or her to make a quick decision and report to the

right

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authority so as to secure safety.

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, children that are victims of rape are obliged to seek

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refuge by making the

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decisions and seeking

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immediate help from the

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source. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is vital for kids to think critically about their feelings and go for the best option because it would help stabilise their mental health, make them

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be courageous and tactful.