Some people say that it is the responsibility of the citizens to take care of the environment. While others say that it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both the views and state your opinion.

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In recent days ,environmental protection has been a flourishing social issue .some
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tend to believe that nature should
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by society while others argue that,it is the responsibility of authority. In
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I will scrutinize both aspects before finding my opinion . On one hand,through various ways folk can protect
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.
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, the usage of
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has tremendously increased
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days.it has been one of the major
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which
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to the environment.
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, after personal usage
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throw
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covers to the
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so it's very difficult for soil to absorb
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therefore
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waste remain in the environment. Billions of
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wastes are still
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earth .it
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harmful to
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,
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should try to curtail things which
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harmful
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nature.
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,deforestation is another reason
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have been doing which
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several environmental issues.its
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responsibility to mitigate
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actions.
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,
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has
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a major role to plummet environmental hazardous.authority should arrange awareness classes
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the public to the future problems of environmental issues.for evidence,
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was an exhibition conducted in one of the major cities about
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an environmental
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problem
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which help
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to acquire basic knowledge regarding these issues.
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,legislation should arrange strict rules and regulations
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society
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will engage environmental problems. To conclude,
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and government are equally important to protect
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from harmful activities
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