If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?

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In the midst of
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technology driven-global world, advertisements have a significant role in marketing a brand. Some say that
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advertisement is not needed,if
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the public
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is buying a
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and
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is getting sufficient profit from it, it can be considered as a leisure activity.I totally disagree with
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I will discuss my viewpoints. Over the past few decades,
people
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's habits have been changed a lot.Apparently,in old days,mouth
publicity
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was the best marketing factor.But,in the present era,
people
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have no time to talk to each other,
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no mouth
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.
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it is essential to keep advertising about a
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,even it has a good sale.
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, after a while, we will forget about that particular production and go for new which is trending in market that time,
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the old one's
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will go down.To illustrate
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, I can say my experience,in my school days ,there was
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association named '
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scooby
-day',it produces all school materials.For the
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three years, there
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various advertisements for
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association products.
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,once it become famous , the company stopped its advertisement,thinking that
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will buy their
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without
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.their assumption went wrong,that company had to close after three years.So it proves that
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is an unavoidable part of a
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. Nowadays,
people
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are more relay on mobile,tv and the internet.So,they get attracted by the things that they
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through these gadgets,whether the
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is good or bad they will definitely give a try to buy that particular
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.
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,there is a survey published in
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of India
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month,which illustrates that those who
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decades, still have to produce various types of
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to attract folk.It is not for the purpose of enjoyment,they spend more money for
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of their brand and
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highlights their products positive sides with scientific proofs.
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, they get back good profit
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. To conclude, I strongly believe,advertisement is always important,it's a key factor in having a successful
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.Even though
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the business
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is running well ,advertising of that
product
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should continue in a better way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inform
  • educate
  • brand awareness
  • capture attention
  • competitive market
  • influence consumer behavior
  • purchasing decisions
  • positive association
  • enhance appeal
  • product differentiation
  • innovation
  • customers' awareness
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