If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?

In the midst of
this
technology driven-global world, advertisements have a significant role in marketing a brand. Some say that
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advertisement is not needed,if
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is buying a
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is getting sufficient profit from it, it can be considered as a leisure activity.I totally disagree with
this
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I will discuss my viewpoints. Over the past few decades,
people
's habits have been changed a lot.Apparently,in old days,mouth
publicity
was the best marketing factor.But,in the present era,
people
have no time to talk to each other,
hence
no mouth
publicity
.
Therefore
it is essential to keep advertising about a
product
,even it has a good sale.
Otherwise
, after a while, we will forget about that particular production and go for new which is trending in market that time,
therefore
the old one's
business
will go down.To illustrate
this
, I can say my experience,in my school days ,there was
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association named '
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-day',it produces all school materials.For the
first
three years, there
was
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various advertisements for
this
association products.
However
,once it become famous , the company stopped its advertisement,thinking that
people
will buy their
product
without
this
.their assumption went wrong,that company had to close after three years.So it proves that
publicity
is an unavoidable part of a
business
. Nowadays,
people
are more relay on mobile,tv and the internet.So,they get attracted by the things that they
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through these gadgets,whether the
product
is good or bad they will definitely give a try to buy that particular
product
.
For instance
,there is a survey published in
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of India
last
month,which illustrates that those who
tohave
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succeed in their
business
in
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decades, still have to produce various types of
publication
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publications

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to attract folk.It is not for the purpose of enjoyment,they spend more money for
publicity
of their brand and
this
highlights their products positive sides with scientific proofs.
As a result
, they get back good profit
also
. To conclude, I strongly believe,advertisement is always important,it's a key factor in having a successful
business
.Even though
business
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is running well ,advertising of that
product
should continue in a better way.
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