Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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the accessibility to the Internet, many people are continuously discovering a lot of new hobbies and interests,

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in extreme sports activities. Many are concerned that these sports are very risky and should be prohibited. Personally speaking, I slightly disagree with

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statement. We as a community believe that extreme activities need to be banned since there are many unpleasant accidents that

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happened in the past regards to these dangerous sports,

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as skydiving or skiing.

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, they can cause a lot of severe consequences,

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, paranoia and trauma not only for participants but

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for their loved ones.

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, many incidents

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occurred during skydiving,

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as the parachute's strings

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tangled up and

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not

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normally or even the backup one

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well.

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, jumpers were risking their lives and eventually could lead to fatal deaths.

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, let's not forget that

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sport is constantly developing and making these situations rarely happen since everybody is advised to check their safety

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twice or three times before jumping and it is less likely that the backup parachute is not working.

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of

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topic, we think that a lot

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people really enjoy the adrenaline surging through their bodies and stimulating their brains

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participating in these activities.

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, a small portion of individuals can see these thrillers as a

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experience, so they want to try out the excitement.

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,

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dangerous plays require a professional training program or an expert to aid participants throughout the journey to ensure there are no unpleasant events happening.

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, in skydiving, for beginner users, there

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usually an advanced player or a professional person who either

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with them or

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onto their straps to make the whole experience safer and more pleasant. In conclusion, people may think that risky plays should be banned,

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, despite those dangerous factors, I will disagree with the statement and believe that with extra precaution and preparation, we can still enjoy them.