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In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach ?

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we are seeing that many people are involving in plastic surgery and
this
 take place has several reasons and
this
 essay present the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 issue. the contemporary , having an operation cheek, nose, lip and other
body
  has many disadvantages
such
 as to uncompensated  happy and
appear
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toappear
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 dissolve problem and error medical, 
furthermore
,hide a real  appear especially
face
, it can be made many
difficult
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difficulties
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such
 as recognize a
face
 in check passport , make problem in realantship particularly for marriage, remove nurture
face
 and make terrible
face
 and
body
 and others factors can
be happen
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 terrible consequences future . On one other hand , one of the most beneficial plastic surgery
,
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apply
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is increasing their confidence especially many females have problems with their
face
 and
body
 and  they are obsessed with Their
body
 that having plastic surgery can be removed worry about appear,
also
, leads to grown faith themselves that it can be made more useful life,
in addition
,those who a  have accidents or have take place dangerous sport if they injury on
face
 or
body
 , it will be helped to survive and it is the force that everyone has right a beautiful
face
 and having a standard operation especially
face
 It can be leads to use for every person. to sum up , those who do not have confidence about their appearance everyone has the authority to change
face
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the face
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 and having a necessary operation that  can be helped them it is so particularly needed for peoples'
livesunless
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lives unless
 exaggeration on
this
 Issue it con
be happened
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happen
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 awfully.
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