Some people believe that bicycles are the best mode of transport in the cities, while others disagree. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both view and give your opinion.

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Bicycle
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is a one of the famous
transport
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in our
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. A lot of people think that
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type of
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will be more comfortable in the enormous city, but some deny it. In my position,
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bicycle
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bicycles
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have advantages more than drawbacks ,
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can become a solution to traffic jams or any environmental problems. Those who do not like
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type of
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believe that a
bicycle
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is an unsafe way to travel. They argue that you can get more health damage from a
bicycle
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.
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, a
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has very little space for
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you can really get serious injuries from it.
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, we can see some situations that two-wheeled mode of
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give negatively impact for main transports. In
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, both will
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. Despite the fact that the bike has only 2 places, it takes up very little space, which will significantly improve the level of traffic jams with the active use of
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type.
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, actively using
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give some physical load. What will be very effective to improve your health.
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,
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the bike
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bike
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bikes
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will be
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solution for our air pollution problems. If humanity
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the
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,
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the level
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of chemical things in our pollution will be decreased. In brief, I think that bike has minor drawbacks and, if it used correctly, we can have very good consequences.
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, I believe that two-wheeled vehicles are one of the most comfortable and convenient modes of transportation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Zero Emissions
  • Cardiovascular Exercise
  • Cost-Effective
  • Traffic Congestion
  • Green Environment
  • Vulnerable to Accidents
  • Insufficient Bike Lanes
  • Weather Conditions
  • Urban Areas
  • Practicality
  • Infrastructure
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