Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country. Others think that they should live as a separate minority group with different lifestyle. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the fact that while some

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suppose that the migration

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should adopt a new

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in the foreign country, others think that they should discriminate against some

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group in order to maintain their lifestyles. In my very point of view, both statements bring tremendous benefit to migration

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, separating into a

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group to maintain

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still outweighs its counterpart. On the one hand, it can not be denied that

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shelter in

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with distinct lifestyles can act as a precursor to

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more colour to monotonous modern life

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and make cities more vibrant and fascinating, which can attract a

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of tourism in the world. The

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bring their various habits and cultural heritages from their local area to the modern cities, which can greatly blow fresh exotic experiences to the local

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, and diversify the

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in where they come.

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, they can bring their “special cooking recipe” from the local nation and mix it with some cooking recipe in a foreign country to create a new delicious

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.

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, a

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of special events are celebrated annually will significantly attract tourism to come and observe, which can bring a tremendous profit and boost the economy of the nation more prosperity.

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, separating

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groups

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can bring a lot of tremendous benefits for foreign nations.

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, while a

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of redeeming features of

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who separate in small

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and maintain their

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is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if those

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who adopt a new

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are ignored. The individual

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in foreign countries have to face a serious issue, which is social tension. There are a great many cases that the

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in the local area witnessed inequality or injustice to

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, who have different cultures compared to them.

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, if

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can adopt a new

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, they can considerably reduce the inequality threat from local

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, adopting a new

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in a foreign country acts as a precursor for them to avoid undesirable things. In conclusion, both statements can bring a

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of positive impacts to

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.

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, separating

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can help them not only have a better life but

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greatly contribute to the prosperity of foreign countries compared to others.