Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?
Computer
is the most wonderful invention of the modern world and young children are more attracted towards them. Like every other modern Change the article
The computer
technology
computer
also
has its own merits and demerits. But I feel advantage or disadvantage depends upon how we are using the technology
and for what purpose the computers
are used.
Firstly
, kids
use
computers
for playing video games
, programming and now a day’s their schooling is on computers
. Since pandemic kids
are using computers
or laptop
to attend their school for 4-5 hours daily and after that Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
also
they have to use
computer
for Add an article
the computer
a computer
home work
. Correct your spelling
homework
Yes
there are disadvantages Add the punctuation
,Yes
for
using Change preposition
to
Add an article
a computer
the computer
computer
or any Fix the agreement mistake
computers
technology
as their screening time
increases which can have negative
effect on their health, but using Add an article
a negative
computer
or laptop is far better than watching TV or playing video Correct article usage
a computer
games
on mobile
Add an article
the mobile
a mobile
phone
as Fix the agreement mistake
phones
kids
waste their time
for
unwanted activities. In today’s competitive world Change preposition
apply
computer
knowledge is must
and it increases their thinking ability. Correct article usage
a must
Kids
learn programming
and Change the verb form
to program
by
playing intellectual Change preposition
apply
games
will increase their thinking ability.
Like many advantages
it Add a comma
,advantages
also
has disadvantages like kids
spent their
most of Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Change the word
their
time
on computers
and don’t involve in any physical activities. They don’t talk much or open up with their parents, if they meet any of their cousins in family
Add an article
the family
gathering
Fix the agreement mistake
gatherings
also
they either talk about IT technology
and they just sit quietly. For instance
, I remember one such
incident, my kid love computer
programming and we have enrolled him for
coding classes where they were teaching him to develop Change preposition
on
games
. He got so involved in that, he use
to spent most of his time
doing practice and don’t like to get involve in physical activities he started spending less time
with his friends. So we made him understand and put time
limit for using Add an article
a time
computer
.
To conclude, every Add an article
the computer
a computer
technology
has its own advantage and disadvantage but it depends on us how much and for what purpose we use
it. If we use
it to gain knowledge rather than playing games
it is always an advantage.Submitted by reshmachavhan31 on
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