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Some people argue that spending money on the protection of wild animals is pointless. I completely disagree with this opinion.

#people #money #protection #animals
From my point of view, it is absurd to argue that wild
animals
 have no place in
21st
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 century. I believe that wild
animals
 are a part of the earth so we have no right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species.
Furthermore
, there is no reason why we should let
animals
 die out. Others say that wild
animals
 take up a lot of
land
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. I think it is
wrong
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 idea because there is a lot of
land
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 for us to live with wild
animals
.
Secondly
, I disagree with idea that protecting wild
animals
 is
waste
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 of resources. I think one of our problems is
protection
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the protection
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 of natural habitats because it is incredibly important for people and it ensures the survival of wild
animals
.
This
 problem is indispensable for both. The natural habitats produce oxygen for people and stabilise the earth’s climate. So if we destroyed these areas, the costs of solving problems would far out with the costs of conservation. In conclusion, by protecting wild
animals
 and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on earth.
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