The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it. Agree or disagree ?

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the two maps that illustrate a number of proposed changes in the future which are going to take place in Hunderstone

town

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, the

town

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will be completely transformed after the

constructions

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of several facilities. At present, there is a railway in the middle of the

town

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dividing it into two parts. On the left-hand side of the plan, there is an

air field

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which is

along side

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an A2

way

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located in the west of the

town

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this

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air field

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, a roundabout is connected with the

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center

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by another A2

road

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, between

them

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there is a gas

satation

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station

on the railway. The

town

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center

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is surrounded by a build-up area ring

road

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, which is in the east of the

town

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. As can be seen from the

second

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picture, the most notable

changes

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that will be

take

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in Hunderstone is the construction of a new A4

road

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at the bottom of the plan.

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road

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is going to be built to link the

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center

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with the west area of the

town

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Besides

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, a big roundabout

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to the old gas station

also

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will be constructed in the middle of the

town

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Moreover

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, the old

air field

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is going to be demolished to make way for a new industrial estate.

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, a

high way

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will be erected from the

town

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center

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to the

vinicity

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vicinity

of the

town

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "next".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words town, center, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

231 words

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