In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present days,
as a result
of years of intense investments in science and technology, it is no longer needed for humans to eat nor consume any products originated from
animals
. It is common to find, at most of the stores and supermarkets, products
such
as
burguers
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burgers
made of soybeans that taste just like meat, milk made of
allmond
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almond
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or rice,
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clothes that appear to be leather, and many other goods that use plant, plastic and a variety of inputs to deliver the same experience to its consumers, without the need of animal sources. The vegan way of living and thinking comes together with people's awareness of many food, medicines and clothing methods considered to be cruel.
Furthermore
, there is a connection between
animal-based
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food industry and
the
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climate changes due to the need
of
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vast pastures and herds of cattle. There is no doubt that
this
is a new trend that will continue to grow and remain strong for years to come since
this
is a cultural and
behavioral
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change that has just
began
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. Nowadays
it s
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common to find children that are vegan and live a perfectly
heathly
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healthy
and happy life and they tend to remain with
thi
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the
habits and
also
influence others.
However
, in my opinion, it is still hard to not use animal-based medicine. Despite all the efforts, many drugs and vaccines still need animal inputs or are tested on
animals
and I do not believe
this
scenario will entirely change in the
comming
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coming
years. I have no doubt that humans should treat other
animals
with the least respect and avoid cruel methods and procedures but
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the end, when it comes to human survival
such
as medicine and vaccines, as long as we have no other way,
animals
will still be used.
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