Many people work long hours, leaving little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
In the
last
years, many companies have raised their work
hours which led to less free time
for the employee .I believe these circumstances have a lot of disadvantages and I will explain my point of view in this
essay .
First
of all , the world is changing all the time
which create an atmosphere of competition in every field .Therefore
, companies have increased their efforts to become unique companies to harvest profit as many as possible .As a result
, employees' health conditions are in danger , as we may have seen a lot of cases where workers suffer from depression ,anxiety and even maybe committed suicide .For example
, I have read in a magazine about chainess workers who have committed suicide because of their lifestyle in which they spend a lot of time
working .
Secondly
, more work
time
means less time
for your family and personal life
. Also
, a woman who work
more than eight hours a day , will not be able to see her children and if she does ,she will be exhausted and have no energy . For instance
, I have seen the news that Scotland has reduced days of work
from five days to four days , which I think is a great idea .
In conclusion, I think humans' time
should be balanced between work
and personal time
.Certainly , that can lead to a healthy life
and a healthy mind .I believe this
because people should have fun besides
their serious life
and humans' life
really matter .Submitted by bashayr on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...