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One part of people believe that they are allowed to make noise as they want, while another part think that it is better not to make noise in public places.

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One part of
people
believe
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 that they are allowed to make
noise
 as they want, while another part
think
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 that it is better not to make
noise
 in public places.
This
 essay agrees that the amount of
noise
 should be controlled.
This
 essay will
first
 look at what kind of problems can be because of
noise
 and
then
 discuss
about
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why
people
 should not make
noise
. On the one hand,
people
 are allowed to make
noise
. Since
people
 are rightfully allowed to do whatever they want as long as it does not pose a threat. That's why it is agreed that there is nothing wrong with the display of
noise
. For instants, young
people
 want to try everything so they make a lot of
noise
 in relation to adults.
On the other hand
,
people
 disturb each other when they make
noise
.
Moreover
, because of the
noise
people
 do not understand each other, scandals and other negative situations are possible.
Therefore
, it is not accepted by part of society unreasonable
noise
.
For example
, extroverted
people
 like to be in noisy places like discos, but there are
also
people
 who avoid it like to sit in a library. To sum up, while some
people
 think that they can make as much
noise
 as they want, others think that the
amount
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 of
noise
people
 make should be strictly controlled.
However
, I still think that
people
 should do what they want without disturbing others.
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