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First impressions are more important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing good job? To what extent do you agree?

#first #impressions #people #interviews #job
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There is a famous statement "
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impression
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 is the best
impression
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" which is confidently true for
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,
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 decades back with respect to the situations and
compitation
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competition
 at that
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particular
 time
periods
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 but now I can strickly say qualifications and doing well is what that matter. When it comes to
interview
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interviewing
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, the basic needed aspects are confidence, lasting
impression
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 with attractive skills like lateral thinking and good communication skills. In
earily
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early
 day's,
demand
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on
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 jobs is more whereas
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with
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 suitable candidates used to be very less, which lead to desperate recruitments even if the candidate is
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, just with a good
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.
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 will have a great positive impact because when
interviewer
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the interviewer
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have
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 a positive understanding of your profile mostly the entire conversation and assessment goes positive. So to impress in job
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 candidates should concentrate on many key elements like dressing well, a good intro, positive and smiling reply and an awesomely build
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.
On the other hand
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, knowledge is the king and modern world
interviews
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 are no more done with a single interviewer and with
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 round.
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 to break these partialities new age
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 are conducted with multiple rounds with multiple interviewers, so
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impression
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 can not be the factor of
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 in all the rounds.
Although
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 different stages of
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interviews
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 are difficult,
but
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one can
easly
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easily
 crack it with prior planning and preparation in
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a specific
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 job
role
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roles
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, knowing company details, experience etc.
Candidate
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 should be prepared to face different rounds like logical reasoning,
apptitude
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aptitude
, core functional aspects, human
resourses
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resources
 and managerial questions. To conclude, I strongly believe
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 impressions may give an edge in creating a positive impact but it alone would not be sufficient in
this
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fast paced
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 world. So building knowledge and getting experience is what
it
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apply
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matters the most in
interviews
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • First impressions
  • Interviews
  • Securing
  • Communication
  • Preparation
  • Research
  • Performance
  • Qualifications
  • Confidence
  • Body language
  • Networking
  • Recommendations
  • Follow-up
  • Technology
  • Social media
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