The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These line charts illustrate the proportion of having electrical appliances and the number of time spent on housework in a country
from
1920 and 2019.
The percentage of families that have three different electrical appliances rise in Change preposition
between
this
century.The figure of
washing Change preposition
for
machine
fluctuated between 40% to 75%. There was a progressive upturn in the proportion of that from 40% to 70% over a span of 40 years between 1920 to 1960 followed by a drop to 64% in 1980. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
Subsequently
, the data grew stably to 75% at the end
of given
period. Moving on to the percentage of Add an article
a given
the given
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
cleaner
, they showed an upward trend in Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
this
period. The percent
of families having a Replace the word
percentage
refrigerator
rise significantly from 0% in 1920 to 100% in 1980 overtaking that of a washing machine
in 1945. And there was also
an increase for that with a vacuum
cleaner from 30% to 100% exceeding that of a washing machine
in 1960.
The number of hours people spent on housework decreased in this
period. The amount of time dropped significantly from 50 hours to 15% from 1920 to 1980 followed by a significant drop in the next
40 years.
Overall
, it is clear from the data that the percentage of having a washing machine
, refrigerator
or vacuum
cleaner all saw a rise and that hours spent on housework saw a drop. It is also
striking that every home had a refrigerator
and vacuum
cleaner after 2000.Submitted by LiuYajing119 on
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