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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Involving the live classes plays a very crucial role in the
children
life
, as they tend to grow they will their learning power will increase. Physical education classes help the
children
 to comprehend the things which are being taught at the school in an efficient manner.Skills play a significant role to get a job or earning money. I believe that
sports
 are a great choice compared to academic
subjects
.
Children
 might be get involved in
sports
 events in future as their goals, effective P.E. classes helps to develop their confidence , skills and
also
 to demonstrate positive social skills.There are various
sports
 that can be included in the school are football, cricket, hockey, kabaddi, basketball etc...
Additionally
, schools can conduct
sports
 events in which various schools can participate in various
sports
 which helps the unknown schools to create their own goodwill in the market. Nowadays academic
subjects
 knowledge are barely in use compared to the current market. As it is helpful to gain knowledge about something through books like science which we see in our day to day
life
, engineering, writing , calculation etc... Concentrating more on academic
subjects
 doesn't
helps
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 the
children
 to grow with a learning attitude towards
life
. Spending more time on studies will stress the
children
 mind which simultaneously
affect
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affects
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 their health. I would say that equal time has to spend between extracirrculum activities and academic
subjects
 that will support
children
life
further
.
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