Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

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as a
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it is used widely and worldwide.
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used as an official
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of advantages that come along with learning
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foreign
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thus
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there are countries that require one to learn the local
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citizenship,
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workers to take up the
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course and be examined for the same. All In
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learning a foreign
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that are not taught in our schools,it makes communication easier.
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" it never hurts to learn something new"learning is a lifestyle and there is great importance to embrace it. 270 words
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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