Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

All over the world, it can be stated that the majority of society would love to visit

zoos

.

However

, someone could argue that there is no proper purpose

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having a

zoo

. Analyzing the fact that the people can observe wild

animals

which are rare and dangerous from

one

place and having a chance of

conservation

on particular animal species will prove

this

.

Firstly

, people nowadays could easily assess the

zoos

and could educate on wild

animals

and their

behaviors

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behaviours

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.

For instance

,

animals

such

as lions, tigers and penguins cannot visible

in

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all over the

places

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place

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.

Moreover

, the kids find it very encouraging to observe these wild

animals

as it is impossible to find them in their villages or

the

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hometowns.

Therefore

, the reason in which the human can easily get access to

zoos

and have a possibility of being learnt on

animals

will justify

one

of the main

idea

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of having a

zoo

.

Secondly

,

zoos

provide

conservation

and as well as protection to

animals

which will lead to protect them in

to

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the future world.

For example

, the recent research carried out by

University

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of Colombo Sri Lanka, reveals that 350

number of

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species are found that which only available at

zoos

in

the

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Asia.

This

gives the chance to protect and undertake breeding in order to conserve them for the future.

Thus

, it is

one

of the main

purpose

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purposes

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of a

zoo

which

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that

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leads to

conservation

. To summarize the students could

entertained

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entertain

be entertained

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and educated on

variety

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a variety

the variety

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of

animals

in

one

place and the ability to undertake

conservation

will clearly indicate the intention of maintaining a

zoo

.

Finally

, as argued it can

be totally disagreed

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totally disagree

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on the given statement.