Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

All over the world, it can be stated that the majority of society would love to visit

zoos

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.

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, someone could argue that there is no proper purpose

of

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for

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having a

zoo

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. Analyzing the fact that the people can observe wild

animals

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which are rare and dangerous from

one

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place and having a chance of

conservation

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on particular animal species will prove

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.

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, people nowadays could easily assess the

zoos

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and could educate on wild

animals

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and their

behaviors

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.

For instance

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,

animals

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such

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as lions, tigers and penguins cannot visible

in

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apply

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all over the

places

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place

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, the kids find it very encouraging to observe these wild

animals

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as it is impossible to find them in their villages or

the

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hometowns.

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, the reason in which the human can easily get access to

zoos

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and have a possibility of being learnt on

animals

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will justify

one

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of the main

idea

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of having a

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,

zoos

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provide

conservation

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and as well as protection to

animals

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which will lead to protect them in

to

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apply

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the future world.

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, the recent research carried out by

University

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the University

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of Colombo Sri Lanka, reveals that 350

number of

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species are found that which only available at

zoos

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in

the

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Asia.

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gives the chance to protect and undertake breeding in order to conserve them for the future.

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, it is

one

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of the main

purpose

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purposes

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of a

zoo

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which

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that

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leads to

conservation

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. To summarize the students could

entertained

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entertain

be entertained

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and educated on

variety

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a variety

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of

animals

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in

one

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place and the ability to undertake

conservation

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will clearly indicate the intention of maintaining a

zoo

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, as argued it can

be totally disagreed

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totally disagree

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on the given statement.