Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in the city centers while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern society, the proliferation of private

cars

has put a strain on the

transport

system and caused

traffic

congestion. It is often said that introducing restrictions to prohibit car ownership in the city centre is one of the effective methods to alleviate these problems.

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some people consider

this

to be impossible to do. Personally, I believe that privately owned vehicles should be banned to drive an efficient

transport

system. On the one hand, it is undeniable that the swelling of

cars

has taken its toll on

traffic

problems. That could be explained by the fact that in some metropolis cities where there is a large population, the quantity of

cars

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more than ever before, which makes up a lot of land to park.

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, car ownerships should stop working in urban areas and

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is a possible approach

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in recent days as a number of big cities from around the world are

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this

solution. Take Amsterdam for a good example, almost all citizens commute to work by

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, which would reduce gridlock congestion to 28% in 2019 in comparison to 40% in 2018.

As a result

, when the national government restricts the volume of private vehicles, it will curb

traffic

issues and reduce air pollution. On the other

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cars

are not the principal factors that contribute to

traffic

congestion in current days. People need to take into consideration some external factors

such

as public awareness and the quality of infrastructure. It is true that

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many city dwellers suffer from inadequate

transport

infrastructure

along with

dense

transport

density which could lead to stuck in

traffic

jams at peak hours.

Furthermore

, irresponsible driving habits would trigger

this

obstacle. That's why

according to

an article published in the journal The New York Times, the proportion of global car accidents increased to 62%, compared with 50% in 2018.

Consequently

, it is understandable that the public considers the aforementioned method to be unrealistic because

cars

have not contributed to key reasons. In conclusion,

although

people have widely different views on

this

adverse trend, I believe that banning

cars

could

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residents

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deal with movement difficulties. In the future, I predict that there will be a considerable decrease in the figure for

cars

in inner cities.