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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Wearing
school
uniforms
 are compulsory in a large number of countries around the world because it prevents discrimination between
students
 enhances the feeling of unity and helps to eliminate distractions in the classroom.
However
, it prevents
students
 to express their personalities, improving social skills and maybe it is against human rights.
In
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this
 essay will be discussed the advantages and disadvantages of
school
uniforms
.
Students
 who wear
uniforms
 feel
equally
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 and that prevent any type of bullying or discrimination between different financial backgrounds as
students
 from poor families usually could not spend money on expensive and fashionable
clothes
 like the
high class
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 families
children
.
Furthermore
, they are united due to the feeling that they belong to the same community. Studying in the same college and wearing the same type of
clothes
 making
children
 connecting and cooperative. Another reason which
uniforms
 are beneficial is that
students
 could be more concentrating on their studies at not having to spend time about what
clothes
 they will wear at
school
 to impress.
Although
, wearing a
school
 uniform causes some issues
such
 as
children
 couldn’t express freely their personality and creativity.As we know
clothes
 can represent the type of character and beliefs of any human being.
Moreover
, the same
clothes
 for all the
children
 could be against the human rights about their freedom of decision and individuality.
For example
, when a university forces
students
 to wear a uniform without their will that deprives the
students
 to take their own decisions. In summary,compulsory
school
 uniform has many pros like stopping discrimination about the
students
 financial status, enhance equality and concentrations on studies but the other hand, it prevents them to express themselves and to take decisions.I strongly believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks and
school
uniforms
 are beneficial for the
students
 and all the academic community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic focus
  • fashion trends
  • peer pressure
  • social class disparities
  • disciplinary environment
  • cost-effective
  • school identity
  • sense of belonging
  • individual expression
  • dress codes
  • professional attire
  • body types
  • school spirit
  • creativity suppression
  • equal footing
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