In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in water, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Plastic
pollution is becoming one of the greatest threats to our environment, particularly caused by oceans, and plastic
bags
are the main culprits. Some have therefore
suggested banning the use of these bags
. This
essay also
agrees with this
initiative because it removed the market causing environmental crises and banning plastic
bags
raises awareness of single-use customers.
The primary reason why plastic
bags
are out of the market is that environmental problems are a big issue in our nation. Around 4 trillion are used annually and since they are not used for biodiversity, most end up in waterways. For example
, every year drainage problems in our societies because some people do not to proper guidelines, every plastic
bag should be put in by proper area or a dustbin. While
bags
are not the only plastic
being thrown carelessly, they certainly make up a large proportion and therefore
banning them would be a step in the right direction at least.
The second main reason why banning plastic
bags
is awareness of single-use plastic
and consumption in general. When Woolworths supermarket, for instance
, implemented a ban at the checkout this
year, many people were forced to reconsider other convinced and bad habits they had maintained for decades. Furthermore
, the bag bans also
sparked action regarding the use of plastic
straws, disposable coffee cups and packaging in general, all of which the environmental problems. Clearly, if stores take a strong position and prohibit the single-use of the restriction, the knock-on effect can be powerful.
In conclusion, this
essay believes in the practical and psychological impacts of banning plastic
bags
, this
single-step flow can have far-reaching consequences and soon more store guidelines for the policy.Submitted by nikhilnath1996 on
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task achievement
The essay demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and takes a clear position. However, some arguments need further development and clarification. Be sure to support your points with more detailed examples and explanations. For instance, it's not entirely clear what specific environmental crises plastic bags are causing, or how banning them directly addresses these issues.
coherence cohesion
While the essay has a logical structure, there are a few areas where the logical flow could be improved. Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next, and that each point is clearly and logically connected to your main argument. For example, the connection between banning plastic bags and raising awareness about single-use plastics could be made clearer. Also, ensure that your examples are directly linked to the points you are making.
coherence cohesion
The essay presents a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively summarizing the main arguments.
task achievement
The essay takes a clear stance on the issue and supports it with arguments and examples.
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