n contemporary society, many
people
think that important scientific
research
should be managed and controlled by
governments
instead
of private
companies
. Personally , I think that
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companies
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but with supervision under the
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For a variety of reasons,
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rather than private
companies
should control
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scientific
research
. Government has the facilities and resources to carry out
research
on
projects
. It would provide the appropriate proper
projects
for certain
people
who are talented in
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areas. Every scientist could take part in
research
projects
using their professional knowledge if they join the suitable
projects
.
Therefore
, the
projects
may have great achievements through those outstanding scientists. Apart from that,
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are better harnessed.
For instance
, vaccination is good for human’s health.
For example
, In China, with the development of the coronavirus vaccine developed by the government rather than privately owned pharmaceutical
companies
,
people
would inject vaccination freely which is provided by the state. It not only makes
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but
also
can temporarily avoid the huge disease caused by the virus.Thanks to vaccination, we can live with
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companies
However
, we have no reason to ignore the benefits of researching by the private
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For instance
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are gaining maximum profits. For operating firms, there are numerous competitors producing homogenous
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of
products
and producing efficiency.
As a result
,
people
would get
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of new and better
products
and services.
In conclusion,
although
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companies
have
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quality of
products
,
governments
have wider opportunities for scientists and
research
results can be used in better and quicker ways. In my opinion,
governments
rather than private sectors should monitor
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scientific
research
.