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Some children think that nowadays children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?

#children #freedom
Today we are living in a world
that is
 surrounded by electronic gadgets. As digitalization is growing at a fast pace the youth are having more power than the pupils in the past times. I agree with the statement that these days minors enjoy more independence than in previous times. A number of statements will state my opinion.
Firstly
, the main reason why juveniles
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 enjoying more power is that their
parents
 think that they are capable and intelligent enough to decide and make their own decision. The kids of the current generation grow up quicker and more developed than their
parents
 did. They know many more knowledgeable things that even their
parents
 and grandparents are not aware of. So, they tend their infant to make by themselves.
This
 freedom is due to the IT boom. Another supporting reason behind
this
 is that
parents
 do have not enough
time
 for monitoring their children's activities. Even some of them have no
time
 to meet their loved ones.
In addition
 to
this
, most of the kids are facilitated with all the expensive and luxurious amenities since childhood which gives born to the word "right".
Moreover
, due to longer working ,
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hours
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 the mother who has small babies cannot give more
time
 but somehow electronic gadgets have replaced it. While
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 earlier one parent worked and another supervised their children. In past days, working hours were less compared to recent
time
. To recapitulate, in my ,opinion freedom is a thing that everyone wants in one's life.
In addition
 to
this
, the independence offered to today's youth is large and inevitable. Children should not cross the freedom they have and
also
 not make their
parents
 unhappy.
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