Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about

#friend #celebration #job #promotion #information

How are you? I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to let you know about the celebration which, I planned after getting promoted. Yes, I am promoted, you read right. Well, I was expecting

this

promotion

from

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the

last

year. As you know, I was working as a senior relationship executive in WWICS for the

last

three years. I had got many prizes

such

as employee of the year and best employee awards from my organization.

Finally

, God granted my wish and I have been promoted as a Branch Manager. I joined the office as a Branch Manager

from

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yesterday. After joining, I thought to celebrate

this

moment but with my friend, it will never

complete

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. Well, I have decided to arrange a pool party on 7th April at 7 o’clock in the evening at Hotel Deccan. At

this

party, I have only invited our friends and we all are free on the weekend,

therefore

, I opted for

this

date and time. I know you are having a question that where to stay. Don’t worry I have arranged three rooms for us in the same hotel so that we can relax after having fun.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

199 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

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