Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

How are you? I hope

this

Linking Words

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to let you know about the celebration which, I planned after getting promoted. Yes, I am promoted, you read right. Well, I was expecting

this

Linking Words

promotion

from

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

last

Linking Words

year. As you know, I was working as a senior relationship executive in WWICS for the

last

Linking Words

three years. I had got many prizes

such

Linking Words

as employee of the year and best employee awards from my organization.

Finally

Linking Words

, God granted my wish and I have been promoted as a Branch Manager. I joined the office as a Branch Manager

from

Change preposition

apply

show examples

yesterday. After joining, I thought to celebrate

this

Linking Words

moment but with my friend, it will never

complete

Add a missing verb

be complete

show examples

. Well, I have decided to arrange a pool party on 7th April at 7 o’clock in the evening at Hotel Deccan. At

this

Linking Words

party, I have only invited our friends and we all are free on the weekend,

therefore

Linking Words

, I opted for

this

Linking Words

date and time. I know you are having a question that where to stay. Don’t worry I have arranged three rooms for us in the same hotel so that we can relax after having fun.

ajinkya.sarnaikMon Sep 20 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

199 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Is this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, in the majority of societies, the phenomenon of individualism is getting quite debatable as people are putting their personal issues on top of everything which has both benefited the societies with individual growth and shortened pressure on authorities and harmed them by economic decline and less social interaction.
7
band
Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is discussed that high schools must have art classes as a compulsory subject because of its importance on a child's development as other subjects. This writer agrees with this statement and will show why art is very helpful in the future careers of children in the following essay.
7.5
band
In the past, most working people had only one job however nowadays more and more people have more than one job at the same time. what are the reasons for this development? what are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?
Nowadays, an expanding number of people are opting for holding multiple jobs at the same time. There could be several reasons why this is the case and it has its own drawbacks and benefits.
6.5
band
Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views on the effectiveness of advertisements in persuading customers to buy products. Some believe that advertising is highly successful in influencing customers' purchasing decisions, while others think that it has little to no impact. Personally, I believe that advertising is a successful way to persuade people to buy products, and the subsequent paragraphs will elaborate on this viewpoint.
7
band
It has been said that reading for pleasure is better in developing imagination and language skills than watching T.V. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a thought that the feeling of enjoyment from reading is better for creativity and vocabulary than watching TV. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion because interpreting the plot and story is usually required to read a book. Also, the book contains detailed language that can be valuable in broadening vocabulary.

Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about

The Greeting

In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Is this is a positive or negative development?

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the past, most working people had only one job however nowadays more and more people have more than one job at the same time. what are the reasons for this development? what are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been said that reading for pleasure is better in developing imagination and language skills than watching T.V. To what extent do you agree or disagree?