stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. what do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest ?
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a vital
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life style
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quality
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life
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destress
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distress
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ultimately
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attacked
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attack
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fast food
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lifestyle.
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stressful
increasing
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an increasing
population
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the population
are
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is
of
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for
stress related
sickness. Add a hyphen
stress-related
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workaholic
workoholic
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nutrient
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nutrients
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body
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the body
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