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Globalization is creating world in one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#globalization #world #culture #identity
Development in technology makes it easier for everyone to share and follow each other’s special occasions which not only taking
people
 under one roof but
also
 insisting them
to
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forget about their roots. Advanced technology is one of the salient
factor
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factors
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 for having all cultures together. Since
,
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people
 have social media available all over the world which
is
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it
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 telling
people
 how to live their life by showing different countries customs and rituals. As a result,
people
 are becoming more enthusiastic towards them rather than their own special occasions.
For instance
, India is famous for its Diwali function and for firecrackers but now
as
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Diwali is known
by
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worldwide through
instagram
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Instagram
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 and
facebook
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 so
mostly
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most
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country
’s
people
 enjoy burning crackers on that special day.
Moreover
, Travelling
is
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also
 become
afforadable
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affordable
 for everyone in
this
 era.
Thus
,
people
 can travel from one
country
 to another
country
 for getting information or enjoying other’s
lifestyle
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. If they like their living more satisfied than living in their own
country
 they decided to move in that
country
 for their whole life.
Hence
, they begin to forget about their own identifications and consider themselves a part of that nation in which they are living. Overall, it has been becoming very
conveninant
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convenient
 due to the latest
amenties
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amenities
 like Social sites and
Autumobiles
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Automobiles
 which giving
opportunity
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an opportunity
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 to be a part of
this
 Globalization.
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