Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. ​    Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the era of globalization, a

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number of

people

are getting more passionate about travelling across the world to explore the world beyond their imagination than it used to be in the past. Many inhabitants consider that

this

tendency has a beneficial impact,

whereas

others believe it

as

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money

down the drain. The objective of

this

essay is to examine whether going on a holiday plays a crucial role in

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human’s

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life or

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it

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is frittering away precious resources. On the one hand,

people

travelling always develop empathy and a deeper understanding of other cultures, as visiting various locations may broaden individuals’

worldview

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.

In other words

, being more tolerant about a culture distinctive from yours is a part of not only being wiser

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but

also

improving brain capacities.

For instance

, research by scientists at the University of Arizona has shown that 70% of

people

feel better, both physically and psychologically after travelling;

in addition

, there is a quote by Saint Augustine, which goes “

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world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page”.

Consequently

,

this

tendency has been considered as a beneficial contribution to a person’s mental

as well as

physical

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.

On the other hand

,

while

living in a foreign country, many inhabitants can face

with

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severe obstacles, taking into consideration the fact that the vast majority of basic needs may cost an arm and a leg. In other quarters, prices for groceries, accommodation and transportation abroad can

distinguish

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from the prices back

at

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home. To cite an example,

according to

the statistics, more than 60% of individuals have lost a huge amount of

money

travelling abroad, because of unexpected costs,

such

as an accident and medical treatment.

Hence

, in some cases going on a holiday may be just

wasting

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time and

money

.

To sum up

, all aforementioned points illustrate that

although

travelling

do

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requires

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a huge amount of

money

and time, it can be

advantageous

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experience for residents. As far as I am concerned, if inhabitants did not

visited

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foreign countries, they wouldn’t connect with different

people

from different cultures, without stepping out of

comfort

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zone.