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Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say – What is the topic of presentation? – What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? – What are your requirements for conducting this presentation?

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Partnered with Business Leaders to maintain a highly motivated and engaged workforce Designed and implemented employee engagement activities Supported the L&D Team
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 designing and implementation of Training programs Only POC for the implementation of HRIS in the East Zone Scrum Master having
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experience of 6 years with a keen ability to understand and build complex
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 and focussing relentlessly on removing impediments from teams as well as delivering customer-centric products and features
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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