Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem such measures cause?

Animal’s manufacturing obtains a large scale of

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expansion while comparing to agricultural

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process. The

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that many

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are considered

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of

land

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for

meat

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production would meet

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consequences

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as the

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scare. Based on that,

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should downsize the need

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production to maintain

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quality. To express my own point of view and knowledge, there are several measurements that should be executed to redeem

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problem

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.

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, apart from the

authentically

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meat

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products

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contain proteins for a body need, there

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a

tremendously

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source of plant-based

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beans, mushroom, spinach, tofu, etc., with higher alternatives (vitamins, micronutrition,) while

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the agricultural purpose. By far, these

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are still considered to be edible and easy to grow without spending too

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and effort to raise compared to animals. Other

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for the problems arriving from the exceptional of

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industry, many scientists, researchers, doctors, have delivered a method of extracting those proteins containing inside the

nature

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products

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and making them into pills or powder. Many athletes who are the most protein consumers are using Whey Protein powder

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of consuming

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products

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is

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example

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substitute

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. Another way to reduce

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meat

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consumption is

educating

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people

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to become

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vegetarians or vegans.

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eating lifestyle is somehow can ease the

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and may encourage

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to be healthier both physically and mentally, reducing the factories effect for producing

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products

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which lead to

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environment

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protection.

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would be caused by the fact of the world population explosion where

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keep growing in numbers along with the

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expansion needed to maintain the living standard (houses, farming, entertaining,). So, the requirements for

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would be raise day by day. Individuals should take

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problem

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seriously

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sustain the

nature

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condition for the future of themselves and for global exists.