More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays no
of
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organizations
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permit their workers
work
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from the comfort of
home
or artificially
instead
of visiting
office
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the office
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every day.
Although
, it helps to save
time
and money;
however
, drawbacks are undeniable
such
as make people lazy . I believe that
former
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outweigh
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the
later
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which will discuss in
forthcoming
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paragraphs.
To begin
with, the drawbacks of
work
from
home
are considerable.
Firstly
,
employees
unable to concentrate on
work
properly because
presence
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of other family members and they prefer to give more importance to their family works
instead
of office
work
.
Secondly
, if they
work
at
home
,
employees
couldn't get ideas from colleagues and use their individual mind ,
then
sometimes make wrong decisions which
tends
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to
loss
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to
company
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the company
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.
In addition
to
this
, robots require electricity and
also
produce
lot
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of pollution which is not good for
ecosystem
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.
Also
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people became lazy because
minor
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to major tasks done by artificial machines. On the contrary, the benefits of working from
home
are more legitimate . Primarily, it saves the
time
of workers because they commute
at
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long
distance
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to reach their destination. They can utilize
this
time
in other works . Secondarily, robots can do more
work
in less
time
as compared to humans .
For instance
, one robot can make
thousands
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products in one day , while
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the number
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of
employees
need to complete that
work
.
Also
,
work
from
home
useful
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to control pollution due to
less
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vehicles on
road
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people just come out of their
home
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for important works . To conclude,
although
, cons of
work
from
home
are unable to focus on their goal and
sometime
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takes wrong decisions;
however
, pros are unforgettable
such
as protect
environment
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the environment
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and save
time
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the time
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of
employees
.
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