Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (traditional methods of teaching versus the modern ones.)

Online education is a hot topic these days. Some
people
say that e-learning is going to replace traditional ways of learning as it's becoming more popular in the time of
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. I will be going to discuss both views in the following paragraphs and
also
be going to give my take on
this
topic.
To begin
with,
people
believe that e-learning has more benefits as compared to its counterpart. They do have some valid points as online education is safer especially when you are going through tough times
such
as you don't have to miss your class as it's only one tap away from you. Another reason is e-learning is a big win for
people
who suffer from some kind of disorder or mental illness can
also
attend classes with normal
students
without even facing any humiliation. These are some of the reasons that I think definitely making e-learning a pleasant experience for everyone. On the flip side, some folks don't think like that they think traditional education is the best way to learn valuable skills that later going to help them in
there
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life. They do have some valid points to prove.
Firstly
,
students
who
study
in a physical classroom tend to be more social as compared to the one's who choose online
study
. They can make bonds with other
people
who later help them in their life like finding a good job. So, all in ,all we can say that traditional classrooms are
also
very valuable for
students
who like to make new friends or in general like to socialise. According to my, both sides have some points that we can not ignore. As online
study
can help kids to spend more time with their loved ones. While studying in a physical classroom can
also
be valuable for outgoing kids. In the
last
, both sides are right. I think anyway is good for
students
. So it's up to them which way to
study
they want to go.
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