Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that

art related

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subjects are important at elementary

school

level

education

. Even

art

,

music

and

drama

are famous among all

subject

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subjects

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at higher

level

education

. it is not agreed that

music

,

art

and

drama

are as

importanat

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important

as other subjects at primary

school

. Analysing the necessity of

education

at

learning

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phase and the capability of learning these

subject

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subjects

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at

early

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age

will prove

this

.

necessity

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the necessity

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of

education

at

early

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the early

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age

of life is to learn

basic

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a basic

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subject

which will help to grow their overall understanding of

fundation

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foundation

for secondary

level

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such

as math, science, moral science and sociology. If a child is taught

art

,

music

and

drama

at

early

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age

this

will take their full time and attention towards these

subject

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subjects

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and they will not learn

concertration

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concentration

arear. When they grow up and recognise their interest and

no

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longer interested in

these field

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this field

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. They will not be able to catch the fundamental

subject

which is integral to

persue

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pursue

higher

education

.

As a

result

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they will not get a chance of

get

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into their interested career fiend.

Thus

, at the primary

level

school

students

shluld

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should

learn

other vital

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another vital subject

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subject

instead

of

art

and

drama

. Children are not good at decision making at

their

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early

age

. So, when they are enrolled in

art

and

music

class they will take it as a

subject

of entertainment.

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Moreover

, they are not ready to learn these subjects since it may turn their attention in

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time may not be useful as

other fundamental area

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another fundamental area

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of study. For an instance, when

i

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was in my elementary

school

i

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was admitted for

music

, as

i

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grow up

i

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found that my hobbies changed, in

this

situation

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one can be in problem to fo for

further

studies, but in my

scnario

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scenario

,

i

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had full knowledge of math and

scence

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science

scent

wince my mother was a teacher at same

school

. Ultimately

i

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was able to pick up the course in my

mid

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mid-level

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level

of

education

.

Therefore

, it is important to ensure to check the

capabalities

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capabilities

of students to find

theid

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their

hobbies before keeping these courses as part of

education

at primary

school

. In conclusion,

art

,

music

and

drama

are

interested

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interesting

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subject

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subjects

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,

however

, as the

first

step for

the

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education

other major

subject

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subjects

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maths and science should be taken into consideration which plays a vital role in their career.