Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that

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subjects are important at elementary

school

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level

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education

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. Even

art

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,

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and

drama

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are famous among all

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subject

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at higher

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education

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. it is not agreed that

music

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,

art

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and

drama

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are as

importanat

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important

as other subjects at primary

school

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. Analysing the necessity of

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learning

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phase and the capability of learning these

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subject

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at

early

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age

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will prove

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necessity

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of

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of life is to learn

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subject

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which will help to grow their overall understanding of

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foundation

for secondary

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level

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such

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as math, science, moral science and sociology. If a child is taught

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,

music

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and

drama

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at

early

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age

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will take their full time and attention towards these

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and they will not learn

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concentration

arear. When they grow up and recognise their interest and

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longer interested in

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. They will not be able to catch the fundamental

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which is integral to

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pursue

higher

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.

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they will not get a chance of

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into their interested career fiend.

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, at the primary

level

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school

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students

shluld

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should

learn

other vital

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another vital subject

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subject

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instead

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of

art

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and

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. Children are not good at decision making at

their

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early

age

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. So, when they are enrolled in

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and

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class they will take it as a

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of entertainment.

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, they are not ready to learn these subjects since it may turn their attention in

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time may not be useful as

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another fundamental area

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of study. For an instance, when

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was in my elementary

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i

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was admitted for

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grow up

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found that my hobbies changed, in

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situation

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one can be in problem to fo for

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studies, but in my

scnario

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,

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had full knowledge of math and

scence

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science

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wince my mother was a teacher at same

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. Ultimately

i

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was able to pick up the course in my

mid

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level

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of

education

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.

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, it is important to ensure to check the

capabalities

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capabilities

of students to find

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their

hobbies before keeping these courses as part of

education

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at primary

school

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. In conclusion,

art

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,

music

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and

drama

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are

interested

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subject

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,

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, as the

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step for

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education

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other major

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maths and science should be taken into consideration which plays a vital role in their career.