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Writing Samples
Band 5.5

. You want to buy some computers. Therefore, write to a vendor seeking information and price quotation for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • give details on what types of computers you are looking for • request the quotation

#computers #vendor #information #price #quotation #request
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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
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 letter to inform you that I am
interesting
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 in buy some computers from you;
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, I request you to kindly share the price quotation for the same. My name is Nikita; I am running a coaching institute where students prepare for exams like
IELETS
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, PTE, JEE, and GMAT. As
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numbers
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 of students have increased so we are planning to install more
twenty
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 computers for scholars.
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, our
technican
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technician
technicians
 confirmed that a standard workstation with detached processing unit has a better life so would request you to share price of similar type of computers.
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, please share the details about RAM, operating system, hard device, and memory. Since your company has a great reputation in dealing with cooperations so we decided to do business with your company.
Hnece
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Hence
, I request you to send the quotation detail in full so as a
decision
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 can be made? Your prompt reply will highly be appreciated. I solicit your cooperation and wait for your revert. Yours faithfully, Nikita
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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