A thrilling, fascinating, or frightening experience you've had Describe what happened, who was involved, and why the experience made you feel thrilling, fascinating, or frightening.

The sound of music brought me into the artist's world. In my childhood, every time I hear a melody, I get excited and fascinated by that singing. I started asking my father to play tunes and it was something that changed my life. Music has given me many artists stories from their soul stories conveyed through their tune and every time I listen to music, I interpret it deeply and it became the beginning that I wanted to be an artist once in my life. I have begun to study how to convey my heart through singing, sometimes there is a point where I feel tired, but I am still ready to go forward with what I love. Currently, I'm making my own melody for people to listen to and I'll keep improving myself because
this
is what I'm really passionate about. If you want to come and listen to the story of my soul You can watch it on the Youtube channel D Blacklist.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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