Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

After completing school

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, all teenagers struggle to resolve the problem

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they should enter

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a university for a

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or look for a

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. Some see more plus points of doing a bachelors

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and start their career

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afterwards, while others prefer to start

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employment right away without doing

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learnings.

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paragraphs support the

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view with reliable supporting ideas as having a

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or

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qualification explores a vast range of opportunities for a person. If an adolescent finds

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to make a choice between

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options, he or she should pick the option of possessing one or more academic qualifications which are acceptable in the

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market. When they own

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qualifications, employers

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to offer them amazing salary packages which can never be achieved merely by school leavers. These compensations may consist of vehicle allowances, accommodations, tour packages and so on. As well as, having more academic and professional certificates in someone’s certificate file may open more and more doors into a huge world locally and internationally.

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the quality of a

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seeker can be measured from qualifications he or she holds based on standards and norms in the

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market.

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higher education program is best for

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success, all do not get that chance due to various reasons. But, there are

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of examples in the world to prove that an academic qualification is not a must to win

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life

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. If someone is interested in becoming

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an expert

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in some field

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in which

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experience matters more than

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knowledge, he or she can choose that

job

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instead

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of a

degree

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. Not only that, if they are financially weak to continue learning, they can apply for a

job

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and secure their financial status

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they can start some academic things if required.

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, entering into

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higher education after

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school gives more choices in

life

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to succeed rather than just doing a

job

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