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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

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Currently, more and more family
members
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 are becoming estranged from each other, compared to the past. In
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 essay, I will write about the main causes of
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 phenomenon and what can be done to solve it. Gadgets and a high emphasis on study or work are some of the possible reasons why there are fewer close-knit
families
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. Many
people
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 tend to spend their free
time
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 at the
computer
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, rather than
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 by relatives.
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, when my family
members
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at
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 home, they usually sit in different rooms at the
computer
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 and do not talk to each other.
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, not only
modern
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 technologies affect family relationships, but
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 the relevance in obtaining education and building a career.
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, children may sit for a long
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 at textbooks while their parents stay late at work. It is quite common that busy
people
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 do not even have the opportunity to dine with their
families
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, which
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 has a negative impact. In order to solve
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 problem,
people
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 can reconsider their priorities and replace
computer
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 devices with communication with relatives. Quite often,
people
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 have many things to do that do not play a big role in their life and which could be done without.
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, if they exclude unnecessary activities from their daily routine, they will probably get
time
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 for their
families
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.
Besides
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, avoiding gadgets will likely contribute strengthen relationships between family
members
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.
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, my friend has decided to interact more with his parents and cut down on spending
time
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 at the
computer
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.
This
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 led to the fact that his family became closer and much more friendly than before. In conclusion, relatives become strangers to each other for a number of reasons.
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, there are possible solutions to return intimacy to household
members
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, if they give up unnecessary tasks and spend more
time
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 with their
families
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.
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