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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
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 share a perspective that the most important thing about being affluent is it gives them the opportunity to help
people
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 who are not in a good position financially or are impoverished. The essay below tends to explain why I agree with the view that wealthy
people
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 should
support
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 the underprivileged ones.
To begin
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 with, the underprivileged
folks
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 endure a lot of challenges in their day-to-day life for their basic
neccessities
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necessities
 like food,
healthcare
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,
education
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 and so on. The assistance that they get from the affluent can dwindle these problems. To illustrate, rich
folks
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 with all their wealth can benefit the children of the impoverished with
education
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. They can construct schools and colleges where there would be given free books and stationery items
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inorder
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in order
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 to motivate them to come to school
everyday
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. Not only that but
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 the institutes can provide job opportunities to the poor
people
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. They can be employed as cooks, cleaners, helpers or watchmen. It would provide some financial stability in their lives.
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, monetary
support
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 from the rich can secure the future of
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poor kids with
education
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.
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, the affluent benefactors can assist the indigent beneficiaries with
healthcare
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.
For instance
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, the rich
folks
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 can open up wings in
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the hospital
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hospital
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hospitals
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 where the indigent would be treated like any other patient for free of cost.
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 way they would not be
sufferring
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suffering
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 illnesses whenever a pandemic or epidemic strikes.
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, they would get the necessary care required during natural calamities.
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 that, these benefactors can create job opportunities for the poor
folks
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 who are educated and capable but do not have monetary
support
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. It would help them to earn the money needed to buy their own food, thereby, making them independent.
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,
healthcare
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 and employment chances provided by wealthy
people
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 can immensely aid the destitute. To conclude, the essay explains the reasons for my agreement
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 the perspective that the most crucial thing about being rich is to have the chance to help the underprivileged. Particularly, because the monetary
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 from the wealthy allows the poor to get
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education
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an education
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,
healthcare
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, employment and food.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wealthy
  • financial resources
  • philanthropy
  • charitable organizations
  • donations
  • fundraising
  • support
  • initiatives
  • contribute
  • fulfillment
  • purpose
  • selfless
  • altruistic
  • prioritize
  • personal gain
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