Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For many
individuals
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automobiles are the perfect choice to travel in
cities
, but for the other
people
think that bicycle is much more useful.
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essay will discuss both ideas.
Firstly
, vehicles with engines request less effort compared to
bicycles
and the other
phsyical
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physical
power needed vehicles. Cars main built reason is to make individuals life easier and practical. Thanks to the engines we can carry
huge
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amount of stuff with no muscle power and
that is
one of the main features being practical and useful.
Secondly
, we can travel as much as our gas tank's situation. If our gas tank is full we can go everywhere without
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concern because travelling is extremely easier with inline engines.
Lastly
, we can drive as fast as the speed limits. We can reach our destination quicker and save our time by a huge amount. Safety is
also
improving day by day and all the constructors trying to build the cars safer.
On the other hand
,
bicycles
are the best choice for
close range
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destinations and
people
that don't want to spend
thousand
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of dollars
for
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a car and
a
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gas.
Bicycles
are
also
environment friendly
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vehicles with no carbon emissions. In small
cities
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bicycles
are the optimum way to itinerate around the city. You can buy your simple needs,
for example
, bread, water,
book
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,
newspaper
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...
Furthermore
, you don't have to find a place to park your bicycle. You can leave it anywhere with a lock. In my opinion, automobiles are the best choice for
people
who lives in large
cities
. They can go to work or any destination quicker, safer and easier. One more example is, in large
cities
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people
prefer supermarkets for their needs, and the big trunk is a
life saver
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at
this
moment. I prefer
autombiles
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automobiles
over
bicycles
in general usage.
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