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The given diagram demonstrates how the bricks are made for the building industry.
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it starts with digging the
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they use a digger. After
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we place the
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we can use to give proper shape to the
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the drying oven for 1-2 days and
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(temperature varies from 200- 13000). In the subsequent stage, we do the packaging of the bricks and
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to be the final stage before the delivery of the bricks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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