In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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industry is capturing the mind of
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the public
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by showcasing
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, which are of their taste and preferences.
One
of the genre amongst them are
crime
thriller movies or shows.
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crime
novels
that is
growing
popularity
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in popularity
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amongst
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readers
. There are
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certain
factors behind
this
force of attraction towards
crime
shows and
novels
. I would brief it in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, reach for the show is attained by grabbing top-paid actors to play the lead role.
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production houses
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to increase their revenue rate, which can be attained by getting
influential
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an influential
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person to play the role.
For instance
, Korean actor Lee Min-Ho (
one
of the most
top rated
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actor
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actors
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) played a lead role in a
crime
drama, which attracted millions of his
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fans
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to watch the show.
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is the case with
novels
, established writers
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many
readers
towards their books.
Secondly
, the element of suspense increases the curiosity.
Crime
shows or dramas or novel has
this
factor of suspense, which increases the level of curiosity amongst the viewers and
readers
,
hence
they are keen to know, what will happen
next
.
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is
one
of the
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for their growing fame.
For example
,
mystery
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the mystery
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behind a
crime
when
one
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suspect is known instigates
inquistiveness
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inquisitiveness
amongst the
viwers
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viewers
of shows and
readers
of
novels
. As per my
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these shows and
novels
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in
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the intellectual
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development of people.
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, they articulate certain matters that
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people to
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pursue
their career in fields
such
as detectives, police officer or C.I.D.
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some of the shows and
novels
are well presented for the public that it keeps us entertained.
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