Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?

Traffic and pollution

problems

have become an everyday topic of the recent world. Some

people

consider that

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the

cost

of

petrol

is the best method to get rid of these

problems

.

This

essay will explain why increasing

petrol

price would not be enough to reduce

such

problems

, rather it should incorporate some other measures to tackle these

problems

. Surging the

cost

of

petrol

alone would not solve the

problems

of traffic and environmental pollution.

People

uses

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car

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for the luxury, comfort and convenience of

time

, which anyway would always be considered regardless of the

petrol

cost

.

That is

because

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everyone wants to reach to their destination on expected

time

and with comfort and these can only be achieved using personal cars. The other option would be to use public transport but

people

don’t consider using it because of it’s being overcrowded and mostly late for the destination because they require to wait longer at the station.

Therefore

, it is obvious that convenience would be prioritized more than the elevated

cost

.

However

, adding two other factors with the increased

petrol

price can lead to a better solution.

First

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one would be to improve the public transport system.

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there

are

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less transportation available than

it

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is required, so increasing the number of public vehicles would be essential and

also

limiting the passengers in a bus or train to a

considereable

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considerable

number would be

preffered

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preferred

. These would solve the

problems

related to the

overcrowd

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and

people

will require to wait for lesser

time

as there will be more transports in small intervals. Another factor would be to implement some rules related to the number of

people

allowed per

vehicles

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. If the government authority implies some rules to the capacity of minimum passengers allowed in a vehicle,

then

people

will not consider having more than one car in a single household. In conclusion,

although

, traffic and

environment

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pollutions are a

long debated

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topic of recent

time

, proper steps by the responsible authorities can lead to an expected solution to these

problems

. Increasing

petrol

price along with the proper transportation system and appropriate rules can eventually solve these

problems

.